In out first Rough Cut, we made a chronological ordered trailer which after showing our first audience, found that this made an unrealistic view for a trailer. This was one of our own feedback options to improve on.
The feedback off our audience suggested that maybe we could cut up the police report into sections because it ran for too long. Someone also suggested putting the end part of the police report at the end of the trailer to help mix up the order. We really liked this idea as we thought that it would symbolically show that the end of the report foreshadows the end of the character's lives.
Another person also suggested that we should take out some of the boring scenes to make the trailer a bit shorter because we were giving off a bit too much information, which seemed irrelevant for a Trailer.
We found all of our feedback really useful and we think that we should try include all of this into our trailer to help it look better and more professional.
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